The Real Villains
Day 22/365

You can make me the villain
in your story
if it helps you sleep better at night
just don’t blame me
in the morning
for your nightmares
when it was your own thoughts
that put you there.
you swam willingly
into the whirlpool
of manipulation
and spiraled
down to the bottom
until all you can see
is red
don’t you know know
THIS
is from what you have been fed?!
They gave you the plate,
but you,
YOU picked up the spoon
and shoveled the food
straight from the bull
into your own mouth
washed it down
with a pinch of salt.
Like Adam and the apple,
better you would have choked
than to believe serpentine lies.
THIS is why we can’t have paradise
How can you even trust yourself
as far as you can throw you?
What have you gained
by making enemies in the street
of people you have never seen?
Can’t you see??!!
This is what they all WANT.
Red and black venom lack
red and yellow kill a fellow
RED and BLUE
THEY ARE ALL AFTER YOU!
And I.
But we have turned a blind eye
on them
to sling mud and stones
at each other
… they give us bricks
to add to our own arsenals
They know this well!
They would cut off our arms
to spare us the ability
to hug
Because the greatest weapon
that would end their reign
is to love your neighbor
as your brother
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


Comments (8)
Very powerful poem!
Super power words!!! Love this. A well deserved top story 🎉🎉🎉
Quite thought-provoking
You really nailed it with the whole idea of manipulation and how easily we get swept up in it—especially with how we’re given the tools to turn on each other without realizing we’re doing exactly what "they" want. The way you flipped the "villain" narrative is so powerful. And that ending? YES. Love is the ultimate weapon🤗👌🏽
Wonderful poem, well done on TS!
That's deep and profound, good job
Wow - this is just so profound. Starts off with a commentary on manipulation and self-induced blindness to it...but reaches even deeper into the roots of division and the need for a love deeper than fear. I don't know if I've ever seen a poem more deserving of a Top Story! Congratulations, masterfully done, and thank you for sharing, Ellie!
It has a deep, almost philosophical tone that speaks to the nature of trust. Very thought-provoking poem! Congratulations on your top story! ✨👏