The Raven Princess
Dying Swan haiku for challenge of the elements, a Princess Tutu tribute
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
blueberryhope, The Dying Swan, Princess Tutu. Rue/Princess Kraehe
air soaks through your light,
Drenched, like deadly flood, love drought
Relief, dance like flames
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Comments (5)
This is superb. It reconciles the emotional evolution beautifully.
Beautiful :) This felt like a whole story in just a few words. Loved it!
Love this sis
Beautiful piece. Love the image of dance like flames. Really well done.
Whoaaa this was so deep! Very beautifully written!