The Quintessential Quadru-cycle
The Fifth element Redacted

Gales in flux expand.
Vapors white to blackened spin-
Mother’s tears scatter.

Mother’s tear’s scatter
Sustenance and destruction-
Terra lives and dies.

Terra lives and dies.
Bloomed from germinated death-
human passions blaze.

Human passions blaze.
Transposing love, greed, and hate-
Gales in flux expand.

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Where is the Fifth element? Quinta in Latin means “five.” Quintessence is defined as the purest or best example. The classical elements, or essences, of Earth, Wind, Water, and Fire are well known in the world, but there was a time when it is believed that there were five. In medieval philosophy, the believed elements were Earth, Wind, Water, Fire, and Aether.
The fifth element refers to what was known as the aether, a special unknown substance that permeated the celestial sphere and was purer than any of the four terrestrial elements. The notion of a fifth element was broached by Plato and later written about by Aristotle, but neither philosopher used the term. One distinction that characterized the aether in Aristotle's description was that it moved in a circular motion, while the four terrestrial elements moved linearly.
Apart from its dynamic motion, one characteristic that set the aether apart from the four terrestrial elements was that it was thought to be pure. Alchemists later sought to extract what was then known as the quintessence from earthy substances in the hope of isolating an otherworldly cure for mankind's ills. By the 15th century, quintessence came to refer to the purest form of any substance, and soon afterward followed its current meaning, the essence that characterizes a thing.
(Excerpted from Distilling the Essence of Quintessence, https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/quintessence-origin-meaning-history-elements)
This world is in dire need of the mysterious Fifth Element, Aether. Where are you, Aristotle? Is the Fifth element, Love?
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J. S. Wade
Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.
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Comments (13)
Nicely done, sir!
I really enjoyed learning about the history of the “fifth element” it reminds me of the concept of milieu, meaning social environment in a plain sense. In times of Parisian romanticism, this was connected to the idea of ether, the fluid-like substance that existed in the air between those with which we manipulate to interact with one another. Loved your haikus!
Wow, you wove these together perfectly! You told an entire story with just a few lines and yet they can all stand alone and be just as great. Wonderful job!
What a lovely collection. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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I love how you used the concept of Crown Cinquain for your Haiku where the end of a stanza becomes the beginning of the following stanza! You executed this beautifully!
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Beautiful, creative work. I loved the repetition, it really grounds the piece. ❤️
Wonderful, beautiful poetry and AMAZING info!! I really loved learning about Aether; I had no idea! Also, I really love how you repeated the last line of the prior haiku as the first line of the next haiku. It really made it flow so nicely. :)
Fabulous! Fabulous!! Fabulous!!! 💕💖😊
This is great. I love how you went full circle with it.
So beautiful and informative. Maybe all we need is the fifth element like Beatles song to make the other elements last. Love It!❤️
This flowed so beautifully, loved it! And I really enjoyed the parts you included at the end. I'd love to think the 5th element is love :)
This is great. I love how they all connect. Very well done.
So well done, love the connection