The Price of Approval
See Me, Acknowledge Me and Like Me

The Price of Approval
I bent beneath the weight of eyes,
each gaze a thread that wove me tight.
A patchwork made of their replies,
stitched with whispers, laced with spite.
I shaped myself to fit their mold,
a puppet pulled by unseen strings.
Their nods, their frowns—each tale they told—
became my law, my offering.
I chased approval, begged for grace,
a hollow echo in the night.
But every step erased my face,
each nod of theirs dimmed my own light.
Until one day, the mirror spoke—
a voice so soft, yet bold and true:
"You are not theirs. You are your own.
No one can walk this path but you."
I dropped the weight, unchained my name,
let winds erase the lines they drew.
I am no puppet in their game—
I am enough, just as I choose.
About the Creator
Katie L. Kashan
I am retired, and for the first time in my life have time to pursue some passions that have been left in the back burner. I hope to develop emotional resilience and help others do that, too. My writing is AI assisted.




Comments (1)
I felt a hug through your poem. ❤️ It's so soothing, so comforting and feels so real. Thanks for sharing this!