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The Price of Approval

See Me, Acknowledge Me and Like Me

By Katie L. KashanPublished 10 months ago 1 min read

The Price of Approval

I bent beneath the weight of eyes,

each gaze a thread that wove me tight.

A patchwork made of their replies,

stitched with whispers, laced with spite.

I shaped myself to fit their mold,

a puppet pulled by unseen strings.

Their nods, their frowns—each tale they told—

became my law, my offering.

I chased approval, begged for grace,

a hollow echo in the night.

But every step erased my face,

each nod of theirs dimmed my own light.

Until one day, the mirror spoke—

a voice so soft, yet bold and true:

"You are not theirs. You are your own.

No one can walk this path but you."

I dropped the weight, unchained my name,

let winds erase the lines they drew.

I am no puppet in their game—

I am enough, just as I choose.

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About the Creator

Katie L. Kashan

I am retired, and for the first time in my life have time to pursue some passions that have been left in the back burner. I hope to develop emotional resilience and help others do that, too. My writing is AI assisted.

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  • Ann ☕️10 months ago

    I felt a hug through your poem. ❤️ It's so soothing, so comforting and feels so real. Thanks for sharing this!

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