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The Pretty Lies

mostly mine

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

i see my bed as my totally

not in command centre hey

when i succumb to my weariness

when i succumb to the day

i remove my outer layers

it’s for my mental health

i’m not taken by the pretty lies

told only to myself

i’d like to believe that there’s definitively

a definite something else

i must now slowly make my way

to a refuge from the everyday

the everyday i shake off every night

every single play every momentary plight

a bolt of lightning a shot from the dark

a simple murmur and a single spark

my sheets become my cape of cope clothes

like a familiar flowing armour

i let them shroud me

and i can surrender so much calmer

as i slowly put on hold

my consciousness for this day

it slips slowly softly from my grasp

in a slow meandering way

i wanna dream aloud one night

i wanna walk on moonbeams

i gotta a pillow full of old

a pillow full of old dreams

i had a special blanket made

just to hold the new screams

i got messed up sheets and linen

a jungle of juggled tangled seams

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    my sheets become my cape of cope clothes. I loved this line so much! A very relatable poem!

  • Something about the rhythm and flow just sucked my consciousness into a morass of chaotic images. I thought it would be hard to follow initially.. after 2 or 3 lines…, yet my mind deciphered it to my own satisfaction as I went… Just enough “huh?” to keep me a half second behind on the translation to actual thought picture. Very well written. As Spock says… Fascinating.

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