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The Peak Is Yours

Parents' wishes are the same.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 3 years ago 1 min read
Image by mollyroselee from Pixabay

Rise like a winged one

soaring to mountains so high

fly my child, my light

childrens poetrynature poetry

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Jason Ray Morton

Writing has become more important as I live with cancer. It's a therapy, it's an escape, and it's a way to do something lasting that hopefully leaves an impression.

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  • Julie Buchy3 years ago

    Embodies parenthood perfectly! Beautiful.

  • Aw this one was gorgeous! Subscribed and hearted :)

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    A gorgeous tribute to parenthood and the hopes for our children. :)

  • Max Russell3 years ago

    I loved the closing to the haiku. Well done!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    All we wish for our children so beautifully stated.

  • sleepy drafts3 years ago

    Oh, my heart! I love this so much. Beautiful and full of such sentiment.❤️

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Loving it!!! Nature & Children a winning combination!!!

  • Misty Rae3 years ago

    Beautiful, I think that's what we all want for our kids.

  • Angel Whelan3 years ago

    Perfectly captures my feelings for my kids.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    This was so lovely and sweet!

  • Very well done!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Beautifully done.

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