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The Pause That Moves

Reflections in the Midstep

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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Half stride, I stop, toes gripping into the dirt

small stones moving beneath, a stick scratching against my ankle

The sun warms my arms

An insect jumps across a leaf

a shadow cuts across my wrist

I hear children playing and shouting somewhere far off

a man calling for someone

I am neither here nor there

hands loose at my sides

my chest rising and falling in the ordinary rhythm of moving

The middle, a strange grace

a hand lifts and hangs

a foot hovers before the next step

I feel the ground, the air, the pull of the path ahead

Everything seems held between moments

between leaving and arriving

a song in progress that has no end yet

I step again

Pebbles scrape under my foot

The wind presses against my back

the heat drifts off the stones

The motion carries me forward

and still the pause holds on

stretching with me

singing quietly

without finishing

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Fabulous writing Tim! ☺️

  • Sandy Gillman5 months ago

    This is such a lovely reflection on the grace of the in-between.

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    What a beautiful way to describe that momentary pause as you take a step forward and experience the world around you.

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