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When the Sky Forgets Its Stars

A poem about nights that feel too wide for one heart

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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The dark does not collapse

it stretches

a seam pulled wider

than any hand can hold.

I wait for brightness

a single spark

to name this emptiness

yet silence is the only answer.

My pulse falters

a bird without horizon

its wings beating

against an invisible cage.

I think of faith

how it builds its altar

from shadows alone

how it kneels

before what never speaks.

Perhaps the sky

keeps its stars in hiding

training them in secret

polishing their fire

for some distant return.

Perhaps absence itself

is another kind of presence

an unseen hand

pressing until we tremble.

Still I lift my face

a believer without proof

wishing the dark

would scatter

wishing the silence

would shatter

wishing the night

would remember me.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    This piece is deep and I feel has many meanings. I'll be pondering this one for a bit.

  • This feels both fragile and vast at once. I loved the idea that absence itself can be a kind of presence—that line stayed with me long after reading. Beautifully done.

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