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The Patient Who Kills Patients

Yet he once was a patient too?

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Patient Who Kills Patients

He lies like stone

still as death

breath shallow, slow

a final breath

No fever burns

no pain to show

just eyes like pits

where nightmares grow

He waits for night

when guards are weak

silent steps

no voice to speak

His touch is cold

his skin is ice

one look from him

and death feels nice

They say he came

broken and lost

but left behind

a line of ghosts

No nurse will hold

no doctor stay

when he moves close

you fade away

No mercy here

no chance to plead

he feeds on fear

and silent need

In shadows deep

he walks alone

no flesh, no bone

When darkness falls

and lights grow thin

he takes his victim

and sinks within

No scream is heard

no tears to weep

just endless sleep

the patient’s keep

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Irfan Ali6 months ago

    This is hauntingly beautiful—like a lullaby whispered by death itself. The rhythm pulls you into a shadowy realm where silence is scarier than screams. I especially loved the line *"his touch is cold / his skin is ice / one look from him / and death feels nice"—*it captures the eerie calm that precedes horror. The poem masterfully balances mystery and menace. It reads like a ghost story wrapped in poetic elegance. Dark, chilling, and unforgettable.

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