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The Oddments of Blue Exile

Poem by Alicia Berneche

By Alicia BernechePublished 5 years ago 1 min read

Oddments of Blue Exile

What beautiful eyes—

So blue like the sea

The sea was gray for my people

The stare of empty need

The promises unkept in their eyes

And the beauty vestigial—

No cure for hunger

No future for children

So they piled into boats

On the harsh gray sea

What beautiful eyes—

So blue like the sky

The sky was gray for my people

Over a stolen country

With foreign runes in their eyes

A language all their own to discuss their loss

And the beauty a reminder

Of forsaken fatherland

Of forgotten seas

So they piled into boats

Under the harsh gray sky.

My eyes are the oddments of exile

Equal parts gray and blue

The privilege to be just pretty now.

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