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The Notebook

Forbidden, By Candlelight

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The Notebook
Photo by Pablo Arenas on Unsplash

She stood there in the doorway

Shadows laced the gown she wore

The light shimmered down her face

Her green eyes twinkled in the glow

A candle flickered on the table

There were flowers in a vase

The rain trickled on the gable

The curtains swayed, a gentle pace

A book lay open to an entry

She was never meant to read

She hid away inside the pantry

To get to see what she might see

Just what he had been revealing

In the journal that he kept

When she understood the meaning

For days, she only wept

Wishing she could go back

Would she undo all she had done?

Or would she stand there in the doorway

With her nightgown left undone?

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Judey Kalchik 2 years ago

    Written proof=devastation

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Love feast of senses and imagery here. :)

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    I LOVE IT!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome with lots of interpretations!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • So incredibly atmospheric & open to a wide range of interpretation.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    awesome

  • This was so poignant! Very beautifully written!

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