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The North Wind

Sounds of first frost challenge!

By Hope MartinPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
The North Wind
Photo by Tra Nguyen on Unsplash

In Tennessee it starts with rain.

Autumn sprinkles in gently -

But winter arrives in deluge.

The scent of petrichor-

But crisper - colder.

The acrid bite against my skin -

Something more than the morning chill.

Then there’s a shiver that is bone-deep.

It says the harvest is complete.

In Autumn our low bearing mountains-

And winding valley climbing roads

sparkle like flames from vibrant leaves.

They stay shrouded a glimmer dewy veil-

Mist formed by cold autumn morning air.

Air that meets summer heated asphalt and pesticide.

No one knows better than these wary bones-

That the strong biting wind brings the cold.

As I sit and listen to the wind coming from the north -

I know the morrow brings winters frost upon my porch.

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About the Creator

Hope Martin

Find my fantasy book "Memoirs of the In-Between" on Amazon in paperback, eBook, and hardback, in the Apple Store, or on the Campfire Reading app.

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I am a mother, a homesteader, and an abuse survivor.

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  • Fela Baugh2 months ago

    Oh, I really became invested in this kind of winter. I'm in the Rockies, which is totally different. You have some truly beautiful lines in this. Too many to list here, but I will quote this section: "In Autumn our low bearing mountains- And winding valley climbing roads sparkle like flames from vibrant leaves." Simple language, yet the image conjured here and the musicality of the diction are just *chef's kiss.* I love "low-bearing." Wouldn't have thought to use it to describe mountains!

  • Margaret Brennan2 months ago

    I love this. I've never been to Tennessee but now, it's on my bucket list.

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