A long time ago
Brother Mouse, I know
Came into my house
Don't like mice in my blouse
Except in an emergency
Frigid weather is you see
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Great hardships
Heavy ships
In ports
Just have them aboard
Kitchens with no cats onboard
Likely you have seen them
Mice can cause mayhem
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Not a nice time when
Overabundance and then
Put them out to sea
Quietly
Rose, my cat would have liked that
Staying aboard a ship for a rat
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The many meals she would eat
Under the Captain's seat.
Vultures may have one or two
While they head out to sea too
Xtra's for a few others to put in the stew
You never know what goes into a big pot
Zebra, no, no, I say not!
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We had our share of mice this past winter. We did not turn them into pets to shelter. It helped to remember seeing one or two in houses I lived in as a newlywed, onboard ships, and even in some larger cities in the street. It helped me to think it could be worse and how none would be sweet!
I recognize people own mice as pets and that some feed live mice and rats to their pet snake. I am not that person, at least not yet for Pete's sake.
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 28 grands, and 13 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium daily.
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Comments (5)
You brought me back memories. We had quite a few mice in the first apartment I lived in when I arrived in Canada. It wasn't fun. lol Lovely poem!
Oh wow! An Abecedarian is really challenging and you made it rhyme as well! Excellent poem!
Wonderful and lived it!!!❤️❤️💕
Awww so adorable 🥰
I don't mind mice...but I would not take them as friends...yet. Nice work here! ;)