The Moment Before the Cat Pounces
A Study in Suspended Time
I have watched her do this a hundred times
my tabby crouched low in the hallway,
every muscle coiled like a spring wound tight,
tail twitching once, twice, then still.
Her yellow eyes fixed on something I cannot see,
some movement in the corner, some shift
in the ordinary world that calls to her
ancient hunting soul.
This is the moment I live for
when time stretches like taffy,
when the whole universe holds its breath
and waits for what comes next.
Her haunches bunch, her whiskers twitch,
and I swear I can feel the electricity
running through her small body,
the pure intention gathering itself
into one perfect point of focus.
O democracy of predator and prey!
O beautiful tension of muscle and desire!
Here in my kitchen, evolution plays out
its oldest drama, and I am witness
to the sacred pause before action.
She rocks back almost imperceptibly,
weight shifting to her hind legs,
and in this suspended second
she contains all of wildness,
all of forest and fang and fierce joy,
compressed into six pounds of tabby fur.
The refrigerator vibrates, the clock ticks,
somewhere a neighbor starts his car,
and still she waits, still she gathers
this moment coiled like a snake,
winding tighter, tighter.
I have seen this same expression
on the face of the pitcher
before he throws his fastball,
on the dancer before she leaps,
on the child before she asks
the question that will change everything.
It is the face we wear
when we stand at the edge
of our own becoming,
when we feel possibility
coiled in our bellies
like a live wire.
And then—the strike!
Swift as lightning, graceful as wind,
she launches herself across the room
toward whatever phantom mouse
or shadow or dancing mote
called her into this moment of pure being.
I clap my hands and laugh,
startling her mid-pounce,
and she sits down immediately,
begins grooming her paw
as if nothing extraordinary happened,
as if she didn't just show me
how to gather all of myself
into one bright point of intention,
how to wait for the perfect moment
to become exactly who I am.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (3)
You built that so wonderfully! I love your stuff. Keep it up.
Love this. I love my cats so much ❤️
Wow this was really good you made a small action into something so poetic and beautiful that takes true talent I'm genuinely impressed 💖💖 i made a new poem I hope you enjoy