The whole winter's snow
Fell on Tbilisi last night.
Melting now, too warm.
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Lana V Lynx
Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist
@lanalynx.bsky.social
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This index is just for my subscribers. I finished and published this long story or short novella of 6,000 words recently. I tried to link all previous parts of the story in the next one, so if you went along you shouldn't have been lost. This index is just put everything in one place.
By Lana V LynxExclusive • 5 months ago
Comments (4)
Great job! Those photos remind me of driving through Czech in the '90s.
I see what you did here. Fucking brilliant to use assonance and break away from it to make the reader feel the volta in their mouth. In a haiku? Chef’s kiss for perfection. Absolutely floored by how brilliantly crafted this is. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
That's a lot of snow, hope it melts soon
Those footsteps look like ants hehehe. Stay warm Lana 🥰🥰🥰