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Still Moving

The Space Before Everything

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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I turn without knowing why

feet catching the rhythm of a city

half-awake half dreaming

A man passes me with a jacket

too large and a look like he’s carrying tomorrow’s news

but not telling it yet

My fingers flex empty but restless

like they might remember something

if I just let them

Somewhere a door closes shuts sharp enough

to prick the quiet open in my chest

I want to say something

maybe I even try

but the sound disappears

before it reaches my lips

I think about the last sentence I didn’t finish

and how it hangs there

waiting for a reason to fall apart

The sky sits low and uncommitted

neither holding back nor rushing forward

I keep going

one uncertain foot then the next

in the space between what I had

and whatever waits to be made

Free VerseStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    Outstanding work, Tim! Very powerful! 🌸

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