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The Miller And The Mice

The mice won in the end, they eliminated the miller

By Marie381Uk Published 7 days ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2026

The Miller And The Mice

The miller worked where the river groaned,

With stones that screamed when night drew near.

His lantern shook with every breath,

As shadows gathered thick with fear.

The mice came first with silver eyes,

They watched him from the sacks of grain.

Their teeth like needles in the dark,

Their whispers tapping at his brain.

He heard them counting every step,

Across the floor, across his soul.

Tiny prayers scratched into the dust,

Like secrets gnawing out a hole.

At night the mill would grind itself,

No hands upon the turning wheel.

The mice stood tall upon their hind legs,

Teaching hunger how to feel.

They spoke his name in broken squeaks,

They wore his thoughts upon their skin.

Each promise chewed, each sin remembered,

Every way he failed to win.

The river stopped, the lantern died,

The stones grew warm with quiet screams.

The miller knelt, reduced to crumbs,

A feast prepared by careful schemes.

By dawn the mill stood clean and still,

No blood, no bones, no sound, no cries.

Only fat mice sleeping in the grain,

And the wheel turning on its lies.

No more miller, the mice made sure.

Nothing here is as it was before.

The mice stand tall, the fight is won.

Killing the miller was so much fun.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • L.I.E3 days ago

    Cold and scary poem. Crazy mice.

  • Mark Graham6 days ago

    What a thriller/horror poem. Where were the mousetraps?

  • Sid Aaron Hirji7 days ago

    I guess it was the mice's lives at stake so they found justice in killing the miller

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