The Latch Clicks
in which nothing happens and yet something lifts

No wind, only windows
breathing the fog on the panes
and the chair that no one moved
settled a little further into its shadow
Up the road, the sky is dragging
its unfinished thought
across electric wires
pausing between poles like a thought mid-air
The trees, reluctant choristers
speak their consonants
not quite speech
but the grammar of presence
In the next room, the clock
announces itself quietly
You would miss it
if you were waiting
There’s dust in the slant of light
folding its arms across the sill
patient, as if time
has always been like this
not passing but collecting itself
in corners, in seams,
in the places no one thinks to look
And you
you, suspended mid-task
match in one hand
the other full of keys
you feel it
before you name it
The quiet is not emptiness
It is a kind of witness
Not the crash
not the crescendo
but the moment before
the note becomes sound
This is how a day turns
without asking if it can
a latch clicks shut
and suddenly
you are aware of the room
you were always in
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (2)
I especially loved the idea of the trees being choristers!
The quiet comfort of this slips into unease, just like sitting alone in a room too long. Great piece. "The moment before a note becomes sound," perfect.