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The Kiss Of The Green Eyed Narcissist Snake

A narcissist loves to play god

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024

The Kiss of the green eyed Snake

A kiss from the snake with eyes ablaze,

Green flames flickered, a venomous haze,

His scales like silk, his charm like fire,

his tongue was laced with cruel desire.

He coiled close, a whispered thrill,

Soft as mist, but sharp as steel,

And in his gaze, I saw the spark—

A spark that left my world so dark.

With honeyed words and poison grace,

He wore the mask of soft embrace.

But in his heart, no soul did dwell,

Just hollow pride and shadows fell.

I trusted him, his gaze, his grin,

Until he stripped me from within.

Each lie, each look, a shard of glass—

A love that burned, then came to pass.

Now I lie broken, lost and bare,

A husk left grieving in the air.

He took my right, my trust, my name—

The snake, whose kiss was deadly flame.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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Outstanding

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    A really great poem that could be about jealousy of all kinds too I think.

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Outstanding.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Very powerful. Narcissists destroy their victim's souls, and the healing takes a lot of time. I hope this poem helps someone.

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