The Keeper's Hive
A Villanelle on Trust
Prologue
This is for Mikeydredβs Octoberon Challenge.
Trust is fragile, much like a buzzing bee which dies after it loses its sting.
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Trust in the buzz, the beesβ onward flight,
A hive in balance, where sweet nectarβs made.
But trustβs a bough that breaks in dark of night.
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The keeper answers, βTheyβll never soar high,
They work for man, where golden pollen glows.β
Trust in the buzz, the beesβ onward flight.
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His vow of togetherness, of sacred right,
Yet shadows lurk beneath the flowerβs repose.
But trustβs a bough that breaks in dark of night.
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I watch them labor, endless is fight,
The keeperβs hands hold secrets, all disguised.
Trust in the buzz, the beesβ onward flight.
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But what if wings would carry secret fright?
What danger lurks where golden honey glows?
But trustβs a bough that breaks in dark of night.
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Now buzzing bees arise, out of plain sight,
Their sting unveils their lie, the trust unveiled.
But trustβs a bough that breaks in dark of night,
Trust in the buzz, the beesβ onward flight.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

Comments (6)
If the bees go so do we , brilliant villanelle, hopefully another Top Story
Uplifting and inspiring!!! Love it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Oooo, this was soooo deep! Gosh you're so brilliant!
Oh, this was so thoughtful :) I really enjoyed the idea. A wonderful entry for Mike's challenge.
Such a wonderful villanelle, Michelle. I really like this so much.
As a Beekeper myself, I know a little of this secret! Honey Sweet