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The Keeper's Hive

A Villanelle on Trust

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
The Keeper's Hive
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Prologue

This is for Mikeydred’s Octoberon Challenge.

Trust is fragile, much like a buzzing bee which dies after it loses its sting.

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Trust in the buzz, the bees’ onward flight,

A hive in balance, where sweet nectar’s made.

But trust’s a bough that breaks in dark of night.

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The keeper answers, β€œThey’ll never soar high,

They work for man, where golden pollen glows.”

Trust in the buzz, the bees’ onward flight.

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His vow of togetherness, of sacred right,

Yet shadows lurk beneath the flower’s repose.

But trust’s a bough that breaks in dark of night.

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I watch them labor, endless is fight,

The keeper’s hands hold secrets, all disguised.

Trust in the buzz, the bees’ onward flight.

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But what if wings would carry secret fright?

What danger lurks where golden honey glows?

But trust’s a bough that breaks in dark of night.

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Now buzzing bees arise, out of plain sight,

Their sting unveils their lie, the trust unveiled.

But trust’s a bough that breaks in dark of night,

Trust in the buzz, the bees’ onward flight.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred about a year ago

    If the bees go so do we , brilliant villanelle, hopefully another Top Story

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Uplifting and inspiring!!! Love it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Oooo, this was soooo deep! Gosh you're so brilliant!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, this was so thoughtful :) I really enjoyed the idea. A wonderful entry for Mike's challenge.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Such a wonderful villanelle, Michelle. I really like this so much.

  • Henrik Hagelandabout a year ago

    As a Beekeper myself, I know a little of this secret! Honey Sweet

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