The Hushing
Read "The Hushing," a sensory poem that captures the sounds and smells of autumn's final moments, the silence, and the first "click" of winter's frost.

The last gold leaf lets go, a spinning sigh,
It clicks on brittle grass, no longer pliant.
The air, once sweet with cider, smoke, and rot,
Now smells of iron, distant, sharp, defiant.
A final, weary rustle shakes the bough
Where stubborn russet clings, a memory,
The wind’s thin whisper shifts its language now,
From mournful song to chilling prophecy.
Then, silence.
A waiting, heavy pause,
That stretches taut across the sleeping land.
The world holds its breath, obeys new laws,
Gripped in a sudden, crystallizing hand.
The cold descends, not as a gentle guest,
But as a presence, absolute and stark,
A weightless pressure on the planet’s chest,
A gathering of purpose in the dark.
And then, the sound.
Not loud, but infinitely small,
A billion tiny fractures, whispers, clicks,
As rime adheres and hoar-frost starts to crawl.
A crackle, as the frozen puddle ticks.
The *sound* is silver, delicate and keen,
A crystalline percussion, faint and clear,
The brittle whisper of a world unseen,
The very breath of winter, drawing near.
The dawn reveals the work the night has done:
A pale, flat light on meadows washed in white.
Each naked branch, a diamond in the sun,
Each blade of grass, a shard of frozen light.
The world is hushed, and sharpened, and defined,
The muddy, blurred-edge softness, gone.
A new-old stillness settles on the mind,
With the first, stinging breath of winter’s dawn.
About the Creator
Smyrna
🎨 Smyrna is a Artist. Storyteller. Dreamer. Smyrna blends visual art, fiction, and graphic design into vibrant narratives that spark curiosity and emotion. Follow for surreal tales, creative musings, and a splash of color in every post.



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