The House That Held Her back
She has never been well since before she moved here

The House That Held Her back
Eleven years, the walls still whisper,
A quiet ache that will not wither,
Where shadows stretch a little too long,
And silence hums its mournful song.
She stepped through the door years ago,
Hope cradled like a fragile glow,
But the air was heavy, the windows cold,
And the floors bore secrets, silent and old.
Day by day, her spirit waned,
Like rain on a roof that always remained,
Each breath a battle, each night a plea,
For something more than misery.
Yet maybe a house will turn up soon,
Beneath a kinder sky, a softer moon,
Where walls don’t whisper, floors don’t sigh,
And every breath feels light — a quiet sigh.
A place where curtains dance with sun,
And every morning feels begun,
Not weighed by years of silent pain,
But open windows kissed by rain.
Perhaps a door will welcome wide,
No shadows lurking just inside,
And rooms will hum a gentle tune,
Of life that blossoms bright — and soon.
For home’s not bricks nor roof nor beams,
But hope that mends forgotten dreams.
And maybe soon, a life renewed —
A simple wish, long overdue.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️




Comments (2)
Wow’ the whole house? Great work!
Good job. How can a house hold someone back for it's the family that occupies that thing happen.