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The Hidden Shapes of a Poet's Self

Veil and Light

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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I carve a space both bare and full

An altar for truths I have sealed away

A hiding place for who I am

When shadows slope toward evening

My voice slips between lines

A shadow cast by late-night hours

Worn like an old coat in rain

Words become the armor and the cloak

A dance that both obscures and reveals

There is a mask I show to strangers

Careful not to stir the deeper fires

That tether me to places remembered

Only in the silence of my hands

They carry more than stories

They bear the marks of all I have been unwilling

To show at full blaze

Sometimes I dwell in that unseen room

Where thoughts crowd like restless guests

And the poems rise from that gathering

As if called forth by a voice

Contained within my own body

I am made from the halves I hide

The self that meets the world today

And the self that blooms inside these walls

Wild and unruly uninvited

Where my truest lines take shape

The page is both veil and light

A place where I gather fragments turned whole

Where the mask I wear shades into something

Deeper than mere appearance

Something I am still finding

Words enough to hold

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Well done! Definitely feel that push and pull

  • C. Rommial Butler4 months ago

    Well-wrought! "Where thoughts crowd like restless guests" Such an apt simile!

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