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A Sonnet on the Balance of Light and Sorrow

The Fire and the Shadow

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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A heart ignites then shivers in the blue

The brightness weaves the corners of despair

Each longing casts a shadow sharp and true

While hope is always mingled in the air.

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The golden hour will gather smoke with flame

As memory folds warmth into its ache

What flickers through the glass is never tame

It blurs the lines the sun and evening make.

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Yet love outlasts the falling of the day

Survives the slow eclipse and lights the spark

Where joy runs shallow sorrow finds its bay

And every morning wades into the dark.

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So let each day’s uncertainty remain

Love’s light and shadow twined within the rain

Sonnet

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶4 months ago

    Wow! I’m impressed!🤩 This is beautiful to read. I’m trying to work up the courage to attempt a Sonnet & thought I’d read a few entries. I’m even more daunted now!😵‍💫

  • JBaz4 months ago

    I am not nearly knowledgeable enough to give a proper comment on this piece. I read it three times each one more captivating then the last

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