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The Heart Remembers

Sensory Overload

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

I’ve felt the ache of longing for a place, no longer in existence

The echo of that silence haunts like voices down the hall

The intensity of sorrow, as palpable as burning bridges - an overwhelming sense of scent and smell

My bitter tears taste of regret, for a moment lost to me in time

As I’m attempting to preserve the memory of when my eyes held you the last time

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred about a year ago

    Just recommended this for a Top Story in this week's Raise Your Voice https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-10-03-2024%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Send hugs for this emotional set of lines

  • Stephanie Hoogstadabout a year ago

    You’ve written a very relatable poem. I think that we’ve all had this feeling, this longing for something or someone that will never come back again. I love the line “The intensity of sorrow, as palpable as burning bridges - an overwhelming sense of scent and smell”; it really brings that sorrow to life. Well done.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is quite an emotional poem. Good work.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I know how that feels. Beautifully said.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    I feel the same way now, reminiscing about my school friends and the moments we spent together in school. Those memories still evoke a special feeling in me. That's a great poem! It's special

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