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The haven

of safety

By Antoinette L BreyPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
The haven
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I scream with delight. The leafs , the cool crisp breeze. Is it fall

nobody can steal my flight into the safe haven I sneeze, peace I recall

I am hidden out of sight. No snow to freeze, no heat wrapped up like a ball

No boyfriend to fight, no tears forcing me to my knees, I do not feel small.

I turn on the light, my comfort soars with ease. There is no one to call

My fears do not bite, Errors do not seize, I am not the baby, the tiny ball

My faith shines bright, only I hold the keys, no fears enter the hall

My will, my might, terror fleas, no threats, they wouldn't have the gall

And on my heart, you lite, no need to say please, in my haven you are all

We use all our might, no need to tease, no hate to squall

we are right doubts flee, our home as safe as our mind allows us to believe

nature poetry

About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago

    I think these words will be helpful to everyone , wonderful poem.

  • Loved this poem! Beautifully written!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Outstanding and comforting!❤💕

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    this is beautiful. well done.

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