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The Haunting of Car 17 -Yaldabaoth's Seeds

Part 10 Collaboration With Kelli🌹

By Mother CombsPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Part One by Kelli:

Part Two by me:

Part Three by Kelli:

Part Four by me:

Part Five by Kelli:

Part 6 by me:

Part Seven by Kelli:

Part Eight by me:

Part Nine by Kelli:

Part Ten:

The lascivious conductor shouts

The malicious engineer appears

Merged, their two heads sprout

Two faces between one set of ears

Mighty with a Janus curse, they roar

Pounding their feet, the Earth shakes

Starting to chant, they evoke the devil’s whore

She rises from the ground like a million snakes

These demons don’t mean to let go

So firmly they plant their feet in the ground

They’ll bring the hero so much woe

As they slowly begin to bring him down

The fight rages on, and all hope seems lost

The savior has no one or where to turn

In this battle where heaven and hell are crossed

With little to lose, he sent out his fire to burn

On the battlefield, leaving nothing standing

And forever forfeiting his own sacred life

But Yaldabaoth busily seeded his evil, planting

Biding a time that is ripe for Abaddon’s wife

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The End - or is it?

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Mother Combs

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  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    Wow! I have to read more.❤️

  • Omggg, they freaking merged! That was unexpected and so scaryyyy!

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Give me a nerve pill lol brilliant ♦️♦️♦️

  • Once a seed is planted, can it possibly be the end? Even should the seed never sprout or grow, the very act of planting it leads to a period of waiting.

  • Sharon, that was scary!!!

  • Giiiirl. This is next level

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