The Greatest Gift
A Holiday Reflection
Christmas day was behind us.
The year would soon end.
And I hadn't an inkling
My world would upend
~
On that December evening
In Amarillo,
When your mother announced
It was high time we go
~
To the nearest hospital
Where we'd finally meet
Our first-born, our daughter,
So small and so sweet.
~
But our sweet little cherub
Met a challenge or two.
Over thirteen hours later,
I'd finally meet you.
~
And, indeed, you were perfect
In every way
After struggling to make
Your debut on that day.
~
Now, I think back on all of
The struggles you had,
With a Mom only sixteen
And eighteen-year-old Dad
~
And all of the challenges
You've made it through
While I've watched in the wings, as
You've come shining through.
~
And we've had our own struggles
Of course, you and I.
You're a smart, strong-willed woman.
I'm a bullheaded guy.
~
Each time, you've come out stronger
And more self-assured
And the girl's given way to
A woman, matured.
~
Now, you've raised your own family
And they've blossomed and grown
And your beautiful daughter's
Raising one of her own.
~
So, today, as the Season
Approaches again,
I can't help but get lost in
Remembering when.
~
When you rode on my shoulders,
Without a care.
When you knew that, no matter what,
Dad would be there.
~
Then the dark recollections
Creep into my mind
And I wonder just how much
We've left behind.
~
Though the road back sometimes seems
Too hard to repair
I still hope that your heart knows
I'll always be there.
~
And I hope that you know, still,
You'll always be
A Holiday blessing
That God gave to me.
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity



Comments (19)
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This is such a heartwarming ode to your darling daughter 💖.
Such a sweet and heartfelt poem! It’s like a cozy trip down memory lane with all the love, struggles, and growth wrapped up in one. The ending? So warm and perfect!
Such a beautiful poem, Dana! A lot of heart in this and clearly so much love for your daughter!
Perfection! 🫡
Oh, my heart. Such a beautiful piece and wonderful tribute to your daughter. Gosh, it gave me all the feels. Love this, Dana!
Just beautiful - the passage of time is so nostalgic and lovely 💜c
Beautiful, beautiful work, and a wonderful tribute to a beloved daughter - she's got a master poet of a Dad!
Beautiful ❤️
Awe. I hope that relationship is less fiery and more smooth these days.
Fiend! had to dae it didnt ye! made me all emotional and teary! This is beautiful, pal!
Dana I would right more but I believe I came down with an allergy and my eyes are watering. Great and beautiful
D-Bud ~ You’re getting ‘GOODER’ and ‘Gooder’ at this for a gramps👴— My pleasure to know U’z..! J-Bud
Awww, this was so touching and wonderful. Loved your poem!
This is both heartwarming and heartwrenching. Beautiful piece, my friend.
There you go and make my eyes all misty! This is absolutely precious, as I'm sure, is the young lady who inspired it.
Such a sweet, and beautiful tribute to your daughter!
Oh, my heart. So many amazing lines in this heart wrencher. Great poem, Dana
Aww , this was so so heartfelt and beautiful 🥹💕