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The First Time I Captained Our Boat

A poem about the water ahead of me as I captained our family pontoon boat on the Great Sacandaga Lake for the first time.

By Madison "Maddy" NewtonPublished 6 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read

The wings of white caps surround me,

blowing kisses of froth and foam to the wind,

the bubbling specks sparkling in the beam of

setting Sun over the surrounding peaks.

As the pontoons cut through the glassy surface

and the thunder of the motor carries for miles,

our vessel is trailed by a shadowy wake,

robbed of the glittery brilliance of the Sun-kissed front.

But the wake ripples outward

leaving behind a trail

of gentle rolling mounds that eventually

catch the last of the glowing red rays.

As the Sun disappears,

our music swells and my spirits soar,

and I watch with quiet satisfaction

as the last of the disturbed water meets the shore.

fact or fictionFamilynature poetry

About the Creator

Madison "Maddy" Newton

I'm a Stony Brook University graduate and a communications coordinator for the NYS Assembly. Writing is one of my passions, and Vocal has been a great creative outlet for me.

Follow me on Instagram! https://www.instagram.com/madleenewt120/

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  • Euan Brennan6 months ago

    This is absolutely beautiful! 💖 I hope you made a wonderful memory here, Captain Maddy! 🫡

  • Caroline Craven6 months ago

    This is just gorgeous. Makes me long to be on the water.

  • This is picturesque, Maddy, the imagery is beautiful.

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