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The First ArgumentšŸ’¦

How it felt like the end of the world do you remember?šŸ’¦

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024šŸ’¦

The First ArgumentšŸ’¦

In the tender glow of love’s new bloom,

A shadow crept into the room.

Words once soft now sharp as knives,

Cutting through the bond that thrives.

Eyes that sparkled, now stormy skies,

Love’s sweetness laced with bitter cries.

A misunderstanding, a tangled thread,

Words unspoken, fears unsaid.

Yet as the silence stretched so tight,

The truth emerged, bathed in light.

For in the clash of hearts and minds,

A deeper understanding binds.

The first storm shakes, but roots hold true,

Revealing strength where love once grew.

Hand in hand, though tempests start,

They weather storms with open hearts šŸ’¦

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mindā¤ļø

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  • Anthony Dunn about a year ago

    So true

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmedabout a year ago

    The most accurate love

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    The first storm shakes, but roots hold true, Revealing strength where love once grew. That was surreal āœØšŸ¤ You've written a beautiful piece ā¤

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    If only we bail together we may both keep from drowning. šŸ˜‰šŸ„° Very nicely said Marie.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Oh, this is such a beautiful piece! The clash, the growth, and the resilience—it perfectly captures the essence of love’s first test. A tender storm, but the roots stay strong. So lovely!🌺✨

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