The First Love ❤️
You never forget that first love ❤️
The First love ❤️
A tender spark, a whispered flame,
A heart once steady, never the same.
Eyes that meet, a world so new,
A dance of souls in shades of blue.
The rush, the thrill, the gentle ache,
A leap of faith for love’s sweet sake.
In every glance, the stars would shine,
As if the universe gave a sign.
Awkward steps, yet perfectly aligned,
Words unspoken, yet hearts entwined.
A fleeting touch, a timeless gaze,
A love that sets the soul ablaze.
Though seasons pass and paths may part,
The first love lingers in the heart.
A cherished dream, a sacred place,
Forever painted in time’s embrace. ❤️
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Marie381Uk and writers in Poets and other communities.
Stage of Life
Stages of life you came as a baby you might have a mom and dad that love you very much that took care of you the best way they can they make sure you go to school you'll learn so that way you could continue to keep going in that stage if we have one parent that die and part of your early stage you will impact you for the rest of your life especially if that parent was a nurturing type I hug you tell you that he or she love you that give you gifts because that's the first set of love in your life another stage is high school you make friends that will stay in your life for a long time sometimes they may move to different part you know of the world or the country and whenever you get together with those type of friends it's like you were never separated because these friends they make such impact in your life especially when you're about to graduate high school you might go into the same career as your friend because you wanna go to the same college because these are the people you spend the most time with so they definitely influence your life in high school you might learn things that you like such as cosmetology or to culture photography and so on and so on these are the habit that you might continue later on in stage when you want to feel good when you want to relax because you learn these very early on and they are there as a basic again in high school if we have a major change so just moving to another state that might also impact part of your career if you are the oldest in your family each of these stage are also very important because when you heist when you're in high school dipping on the family you might be the one that help with the other samplings and you are the one that the parents count on to bring the family to the next level.
By Marie Ange Diaz-Cervo5 days ago in Poets
Center Stage with Paul Stewart
*** I'm keen to republish the interviews I did for my series with Vocal creators. It's been a few years and I thought it might be nice to revisit these wonderful conversations. I'll be releasing them one at a time for a few weeks/months.
By Heather Hubler3 days ago in Interview
Comments (4)
I remember to the hour. Because we married
ONLY FIRST LOVE REMAINS ROOTED IN THE EART FOR LIFE BECAUSE NO ONE OPENED THE HEART BEFORE IT
Awww! That is so cute ❤✨ I can relate to every word of the poem... You've captured a raw yet poignant emotion in your poem 💖😩 I can relate as a poetess, not as an individual... I hope you understand 😅😃
That is so raw and true it makes me smile and feel nostalgically whimsical,at the same time. Her name was Michelle. 46 years ago. 😉 Beautiful.