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The Eye of the Beholder

An Inverse Poem

By Christy MunsonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
The Eye of the Beholder
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Hate is inevitable

So don’t tell me that

I am the same as you

Because your skin and mine are different

You hate me for not being you

And I hate that

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

So, trust me when I say I know you think

That my skin is the wrong skin

And nothing you can tell me will make me accept

My skin is perfect

Because no matter what

Black is second class

And you cannot tell me that

Black is beautiful

Because I see something else

Is Black my cross to bear?

* This poem is an inverse poem. Please now read each line in reverse order, from the last line to the first.

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Copyright © 02/02/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.

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  • Amelia2 years ago

    very clever.... i really enjoyed this and i think it's a strong statement.

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  • Barb Dukeman2 years ago

    I love the reversal of theme-exactly what they were looking for, I think. From negative to positive your lines convey smoothly.

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Dear Christy - Black or White we're all shades of Grey ~ 'j'

  • olymoolla2 years ago

    Thank you for writing so beautifully

  • Anna 2 years ago

    Wooow, I love it in both ways! Very creative! Congrats on TS!🥳

  • Caroline Jane2 years ago

    Awesome inverse poem. 🥰

  • PK Colleran2 years ago

    Brilliant. A powerful inverse poem.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    This is just really solid, unshakeable either way.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is fantastic. Congrats on the TS

  • Unbelievably well done!

  • the great job

  • saanvi2 years ago

    beautiful.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    That was quite the puzzle you took on in crafting this. And you solved it! Great work!

  • Unknown Person2 years ago

    interesting story

  • Great! Congrats on TS!

  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    Beautifully done. I loved reading this on the reverse. 💕 Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Thomas Terry2 years ago

    Great poetry and meaning!

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Oh I am gonna use this to help me when i write mine! Brilliant work! This stands out from the crowd.

  • OUTSTANDING!

  • Marilyn Glover2 years ago

    Excellent poem-Congratulations on top story!

  • Test2 years ago

    Superb work! Keep it up—congratulations!

  • Test2 years ago

    Brilliant.

  • Oscar2 years ago

    excellentttt

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