Volcanic mountain
Eruption Mount St. Helens
Blast, sparking science.
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My second haiku is inspired by a mountain. Syllable count 5 first line, 7 second line, and five third line.
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Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (9)
excellent word play :) love it!
You had me at 'science'. Loved it!!
Love the use of science in this
Oooo, this was fantastic!
I remember when Mt. Saint Helens erupted. I lived in Montana and we couldn’t go outside for weeks because of the ash. We got to miss school, too!
These are such fun! Great one!
Very nice.
Nice 👍
Powerful last line!💗