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"The Echo Has Teeth"

When questions grow fangs and the silence stops cooperating.

By VishwaksenPublished 8 months ago 1 min read

I left my name

on a mirror once—

fog-breathed and fading

before I could finish the last letter.

They called me by what they needed.

Helper. Listener.

Container of silence.

A friendly ghost in daylight.

But under my ribs?

Lanterns swing

in windless rooms,

each one lit

by a question that refuses

to shut up.

I asked “what now?”

It laughed like gravel.

I asked “who am I?”

and the echo had teeth.

Sometimes I pretend

my skin is paper—

just to feel the wind

try to write me new.

Still, I carry my shadows

like misread maps.

They whisper wrong directions

with such conviction

I almost follow.

But something in me—

the cracked compass,

the stargazer with a limp—

still believes

the broken path

is proof of motion.

And maybe

not knowing

is sacred.

Maybe

being lost

is just

the prelude

to blooming.

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Vishwaksen

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  • Alex Taylor8 months ago

    This is some deep stuff. The idea of not knowing who you are really resonates. I've felt that way too, like I'm just a collection of labels others give me. And those questions that won't stop? Yeah, I've got those rattling around in my head. Do you think embracing the unknown is the key to finding ourselves, or is it more about trying to pin down an identity?

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