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The Disappearing Peacock

A Frosted Verse

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
I was surprised to find out that the blue peacock can survive winters in cold climates... though, understandably, he prefers not to. Painting: The Hindu god Kartikeya with his wives on his peacock mount by Raja Ravi Varma - C. Cunniah & co. Glass Merchants 248-249 Devaraja Mudaly Street Madras.(Ravi Varma Press, Karla Lonavla), Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=13277149

Drawn in

to the crystalline

miracle,

I died,

I died with the earth.

My mind whispered

truth

on frozen plume

after frozen plume

of breath,

the disappearing peacock,

brilliant feathers,

half-formed faces,

a visible mystery,

gone,

like my aspirations,

replaced,

by the certainty

of unfolding

time.

I know

it won't be long now,

I know.

I give my

self

willingly

to an end

without fear

or regret.

I know.

I died.

I died with the earth.

But the seeds

I planted

remain,

in peaceful

slumber,

dreaming

the hopeful

dreams

of innocence

which are the sole

blessed

consolation

of the burgeoning

unborn.

Free Versenature poetryStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetry

About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    An intriguing take on the challenge! Very well done!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Amazing nature poem!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Well done, and I love hearing the meow call of peacocks.

  • This was stunningly beautiful! Also, just wanna ask, is the spelling on peacock in your title intentional?

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is beautifully written. Well done.

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    As usual your cover pic speaks volumes/ it sure looks like a very complicated ride. Saved only by the beauty of the poem. But, never fear, come summer, the seed will bloom again.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    What a way to describe a peacock and the seasons as they change. Good work.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    The numbing sweetness of the cold intertwined with the ‘death’ of winter and the ‘resurrection’ of spring. Beautiful and thought provoking poem, Rommi. Excellent challenge entry!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Darn it, you made me do THINKING in the middle of my work day.

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