"The day I die" is unknown to me
Heavens have already issued my decree
The abyss of emptiness or fulfillment of untold
"Death day" would come to unleash and unfold
.
Dark night or Fragile day?
Wind's shift or hot clay?
Desire to stay or hesitant to fleet?
Tranquility of Heaven or tormented heat?
.
Uncertainty of death but surety of faith
My faith and belief; strong since eight
Actions are worse, disbelief is a curse
His mercy and Love; Except for that I'm worse
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Calendar exists but it's hidden somewhere
I'm unsure but my soul could dare
He would save me if I ought to fail
When would death come and wrap me in its veil?
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The Day I Die Part I:
The Day I Die Part II:
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Author's note;
"The Day I Die", is one of my favorite topics to craft...
In the future, there may be a hundred different parts to it... Idk, you'll see.
Thank you for reading <3
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (6)
Oh such a well feeling poem!
Wow, you've written such a deep and emotional piece!✨💗 It makes you think about the things that are really important in this life and what is yet to come. Beautifully done Maryam💕😊
Ohh! These are very deep thoughts, I really liked them. There's so much in this poem that I also think about. Very well done. "Tranquility of Heaven or tormented heat?" Are you not sure, dear? 😃
Excellent
I wait eagerly for death everyday. Unfortunately, he doesn't like me, lol. Loved your poem!
Wow, this is so deep yet so smooth! Love how you balance faith and mystery in such a simple, soulful way. That "veil of death" bit? Chills. Keep letting your soul pour into these words—it's pure magic! ✨🤗❤️