The Dangerous Walk To Work
Predators around every corner
Hey gang, I’m heading to work
As I throw on my hat and shoes,
I climb out the tunnel, step outside
To overgrowth instead of views.
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I scuttle through the large plants
Stopping dead, what’s that I hear,
It’s a large animal, heading this way
With a million legs, I tremble in fear.
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I hide behind a leaf as it slides past
I continue on my way, running late,
A known detour up front, bypassing
An eight legged monster, not my mate.
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As I turn the next corner, frustrated
I almost ran into a slimy long creature,
Slithering along the trail, in my way
Blindness being it’s main feature.
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I attempt to skirt around it, too slow
It moves a lot faster than my little legs,
So I scurry along behind it, on my way
Stop, there’s a nice yummy nest of eggs.
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I move in closer, no owner I can see
I will put the word out to come gather,
I’ll carry my load as I head back home
We’ll eat well tonight, ‘Eggs a la Slather’.
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Half way home, wait what’s that I hear
A loud engine, a motor vehicle maybe,
Oh no, I see the wheels heading my way
Choose left or right, it is time for me to flee.
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I manage, just in time, to arrive at the tunnel
As I scurry down the incline, eggs intact,
I’m finally safe, I stop so I can look back
As the motor vehicle surges trying to attack.
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We all quietly hide away, far out of sight
Until there’s nothing but silence to be heard,
I’m tasked to inch up the incline, head out
Oh no, duck, I was almost taken by a bird.
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I slowly inch my head out of the tunnel
Astounded at the now glorious view,
I’ll be able to better see any predators
As I scuttle along, just passing through.
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Our entire colony, with our future Queen
Can now move nests, bypassing the spider,
The blind worm, those horrific millipedes
Now the lawn’s been mowed by the Outsider.
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About the Creator
Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Good stuff! My grandkids would love this. And I really enjoy exploring these worlds with them. Best wishes my friend.👌
Wow I loved this story!