The Crimson Claus: A Haunting Holiday Horror
When the Christmas Spirit Turns to Darkness, Fear Becomes the True Gift

In the dead of night, when silence is thick,
A figure stirs slowly, with a heart like a brick.
With eyes like black hollows, where innocence died,
The Crimson Claus creeps in with darkness as his guide.
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His laughter, a shriek, like nails on a tomb,
Slithers through hallways, igniting the gloom.
“Have you been good?” he taunts with delight,
But the warmth in his voice is a harbinger of fright.
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His sack, once a treasure of laughter and light,
Now drips with the remnants of joy turned to blight.
Filled with lost dreams and the echoes of screams,
Each child’s fleeting hope dissolving in nightmares’ seams.
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He slithers through chimneys, a serpent of dread,
Leaving whispers of madness, where dreams should be fed.
With reindeer like demons, their breath steeped in fire,
They gnash at the heavens, their eyes full of ire.
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Each thud of your heart feels louder, confined,
As you lie in your bed, with dark thoughts entwined.
The walls start to close in, each breath a sharp knife,
For the naughty, he hisses, “You’ll pay with your life.”
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No stockings for goodies, just darkness and chains,
A grim reminder of your deepest of pains.
When he comes creeping softly, it’s terror that sings,
A banquet of anguish, where your soul is the feast that he brings.
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So tremble, dear children, and pray to forget,
For Santa’s not coming; he’s filled you with regret.
The Crimson Claus waits with a heart made of ice,
A nightmare that lingers, a terror precise.
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And if you should wake to the sound of his breath,
Feel the chill of his presence, the whisper of death.
His shadow wraps ‘round you, like chains of despair,
A creeping paralysis, a grip hard to bear.
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For in shadows he waits, with a grin full of glee,
The specter of Christmas, your darkest decree.
And when morning breaks, with its feeble light’s glow,
You’ll find that he lingers, with you everywhere you go.
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Each echoing giggle will shatter your dreams,
Like glass underfoot, with its sharp, bloody seams.
The darkness will claim you, it seeps through your veins,
For the Crimson Claus knows how to unleash your pains.
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He’ll whisper your secrets, your fears laid to rest,
And twist them like knives, a torment unblessed.
He’ll feign a soft chuckle, a pretense of cheer,
But know that his laughter is a song of your fear.
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So sleep not too soundly, for he’s already there,
In the corners of your mind, a phantom of despair.
He’ll carve out your laughter, replace it with screams,
A jolly façade that tears at the seams.
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His claws scratch the windows, a herald of doom,
A sinister promise that chokes you with gloom.
He feasts on your nightmares, your anguish, your fright,
The embodiment of terror that steals away light.
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And when you finally see him, just once in a dream,
Know that his laughter will shatter your seams.
For the Crimson Claus waits, with a heart full of scorn,
A creature of darkness, eternally reborn.
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So gather your courage, and plead for your life,
For the Crimson Claus is the edge of the knife.
He’s the shadow that lingers, the dark in your soul,
The nightmare you carry, consuming you whole.
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And if you should hear him, his voice soft and sly,
Know that he’s coming; he’s here to deny
The joy of your Christmas, the hope of your cheer,
For the Crimson Claus waits, and your end is near.
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Comments (4)
The idea behind Crimson Claus came from a fascination with how folklore and traditions evolve over time, especially those meant to bring comfort and joy. Santa Claus, for instance, is known as a symbol of kindness, warmth, and giving—but what if that image twisted into something darker? What if the magic of Christmas could just as easily turn into an encounter with our deepest fears? In Crimson Claus, I wanted to capture the essence of holiday horror, where familiar traditions are subverted, and innocence is cast in shadow. The structure and rhythm pay homage to the timeless verse of 'Twas the Night Before Christmas, while the eerie presence of the Crimson Claus draws inspiration from classic horror archetypes, exploring the idea that joy and terror are sometimes two sides of the same coin. I hope this piece brings a chill and makes you ponder the edges of holiday magic—where wonder and dread blend together in the stillness of a winter’s night. Thank you for reading, and may your holidays be filled with light, laughter... and just a touch of mystery.
I think you hit on a new challenge of sorts. The Crimson Claus tales, a great rhyming cadence throughout the piece. An old time feel with a modern twist.
Good job!! Jason👏👏
The Nightmare Before Christmas you have written here it seems even though that it was it seems to be like. If I am not mistaken there were even a few lines that sounded like Twas the Night before Christmas as I read the words. Great work.