The Cigar of Wretched Flesh
Where Ashes Speak and Shadows Weep

Beneath a sky of rotting black,
Where stars peel back like blistered skin,
An old man rocks in shadows deep,
A grin carved wide, a hollowed grin.
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Between his lips—no mortal roll,
No leaf of earth, no seasoned bark,
But stitched-up flesh, a corpse’s wrap,
Still slick with death, still wet and stark.
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He strikes a match—oh, hear it hiss!
The flame licks up like tongues of woe,
And as he draws, the thing uncoils,
The veins inside begin to glow.
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The scent—sweet rot and marrow’s dust,
A reek that slithers down the spine.
The smoke it dances, writhes, and twists,
Like strangled fingers clasped in twine.
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Then from the ember—whispers rise,
Not wind, nor ash, nor burning leaf,
But voices shrill and sorrow-choked,
A dirge of madness, raw with grief.
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"He smokes us still! He drinks us dry!
Our bones, our skin, our souls, our cries!"
The man exhales—a laughter raw,
His teeth like tombstones, wet with lies.
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The cigar swells, it pulses red,
A heartbeat stitched from countless damned.
And as they wail, he takes another,
Savoring the sins he planned.
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His body cracks, his fingers split,
His flesh peels back in curling seams—
Revealing something old, forgotten,
Something built from other’s screams.
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Then dawn arrives—a timid glow,
But finds no man upon the chair.
Just curling smoke and teeth left grinning,
Drifting lonely through the air.
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Comments (11)
Well-wrought! Can you offer any insight into your inspiration here?
Freaky and creepy. Good job.
That is halloween style spooky. Well done!
Thanks
Love the last lines that do the reveal of what was never there...or was it?
you are the King at writing dark poems
'savouring the sins he planned' love that line!!
Dark and incredibly sinister! I read the comments and saw this was inspired by a nightmare! Honestly a weird part of me is thankful when this happens! I love your word choices. And the pacing, well done!
Such a powerful story. The rhythm and rhyme is mesmerizing. Please, where does the idea flow from? It’s so natural and flowing. Masterfully executed
Wow, you are the King at writing dark poems. Very Captivating!!!!!
This made me shiver but I couldn’t stop reading it😜🔥♦️♦️