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The Candle That Waited Too Long

It could not burn as it should

By Marie381Uk Published 2 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Candle That Waited Too Long

I saw the candle burning in a room

where shadows refused to bend,

its wax melting into shapes I could not name,

its flame flickering with a voice I almost heard.

The air smelled of old rain, of quiet grief,

and the walls leaned in as if to listen,

while I traced the molten paths with my eyes,

wondering if it was me who was fading, or the room.

The flame danced on its own, skipping seconds,

counting secrets no one wanted to speak,

I reached, my hand trembling,

and the candle shivered like it had a heartbeat.

I wanted to hold it, to whisper my fears,

but it melted faster, dripping memories,

its smoke curling into faces I once knew,

faces I could not name, faces that knew me.

The flame died slowly, like a sigh,

leaving blackened wax and hollow echoes,

and I realized I had been waiting too long,

for something that had never waited for me.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    For me this is one is hard to understand, but the words do seem to flow with the image. Good job.

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