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The Eye That Saw Too Much

Seeing things that it shouldn’t see at all

By Marie381Uk Published 2 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Eye That Saw Too Much

It blinked open and refused to close,

seeing everything I tried to hide,

its gaze sliding through walls, through doors,

through the fragile masks we call faces.

I turned, hoping to escape,

but it followed, patient, unyielding,

reflecting truths I had buried,

laughing silently at the shadows of my lies.

The world became sharp edges,

colors that burned, shapes that moved,

and I felt my mind splinter,

each thought pierced by its endless stare.

Sometimes I saw it in mirrors,

sometimes in photographs I hadn’t taken,

and I knew I would never sleep,

for the eye had made a home inside my skull.

Even when I closed my own eyes,

it lingered behind my lids,

watching, remembering,

never blinking, never leaving.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    I think at times we all see too much and it is hard to just close our eyes and not see. Good job.

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