The Butcher's Daughter
Haiku - March Madness 2024 Unofficial Challenge
In the Payne's Grey night
I fumble, fingering hot,
Wet, squishy, sticky
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How did these get here?
None of these belongs to me--
Thigh, heart, tongue, spare ribs
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Cast off suspicion
Find a place to hide inside
Figure out what's real
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Did he put something
In my drink, unwitting cask
Poison to my soul?
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Did his hands probe me
Without permission granted
Did I fend him off?
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Was I wearing this?
Do I even own the tools?
What did I -- did I?
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Memory taunts me
What did I do after dark?
Can't wipe off the stain
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I cannot move now
Sirens scream a warning shot
I evade their grasp
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Slip on an apron
Slip in through the locked back door
Carve the meat to bits
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I serve a cold dish
To the man who just came in
I know I know him
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Copyright ยฉ 03/03/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.
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Hope you found something intriguing in my response to ๐๐ ๐๐ญ๐จ๐๐ค๐ญ๐จ๐ง's ๐๐๐ซ๐๐ก ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ญ (๐๐ง๐จ๐๐๐ข๐๐ข๐๐ฅ ๐๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ง๐ ๐), March Madness.
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Christy Munson
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Comments (2)
๐ฎ Wow, this is perfect! I love the idea of telling the story with a series of Haikus! Revenge is a dish best served cold! (Note to self: Never mess with the Butcher's Daughter, or Christy!)
What a wonderful idea! I loved it a lot! Very creative take on the challenge!๐