The Bullies
A childhood

When the monsters are real,
and they live in your house
and nothing is worse
than your mum and her spouse
*
when the light isn't safe
and the dark isn't, too
and just to survive
is the best you can do
*
the creepy sounds
that fill you with dread,
they come from the lounge
not under the bed.
*
when you don't have control
and your power is gone
you know that the truth is
you've done nothing wrong
*
when you live every day,
never giving up hope
that there will be a rescue
Cos you know you can't cope...
About the Creator
Ruth Stewart
Never one to do one thing at a time, I'm currently writing a horror novel and a book of poetry for the daughters of narcissists. Come back soon for a link to be included in all my news, on Vocal and elsewhere. I'd love to get to know you!
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Comments (10)
Love the reflection of the emotions that come through here, even if consuming. A fitting and eye-catching image to match! 😊
This is heartbreaking and happens so often! Bravo for capturing it in poetry!
I love this and I'd like to reference it in a story / poem thing I'm writing because it fits so perfectly, if that's OK? Thanks for writing this.
This made me sad, angry, furious, sad, tearful and angry and sad and the cycle continues. Because I know how real this was for you. You're getting a hug when you come home. Well written, hon and although it's a tough read, it's better for not pulling any punches and not sugarcoating stuff! xxxx
This is intense. Poor kid.
so heartbreaking.....well done!!!
Gosh this was so heartbreaking and intense. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Oh thus is heartbreakingly real.
Very, very relatable, Ruth ❤️🩹
WELL written Ruth.