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The Beast Below

A villanelle poem.

By Rachael MacDonaldPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Beast Below
Photo by Cristina Gottardi on Unsplash

Against rage and ruin- wind and snow,

Its whispered plea calls out to me,

Forevermore the beast below.

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When sunlight breaks in yolk-ish glow,

Darkness creeps amid souls’ debris,

Against rage and ruin- wind and snow.

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Picks my bones like savage crow.

Pecking eyes for none can see,

Forevermore the beast below.

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Silver tongue and honeyed woe,

It beckons release sardonically,

Against rage and ruin- wind and snow.

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My breathing caught. Apropos?

With brutish strength, it will sing for me,

Forevermore the beast below.

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A blood-soaked mouth after flurried blow,

The monster caged on bended knee,

Against rage and ruin- wind and snow

Forevermore the beast below.

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About the Creator

Rachael MacDonald

Avid Reader, Sometimes Poet, Occasional Writer, and searcher of truths often lost in the breaths between candy-coated lies.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  • Testabout a year ago

    love your poems

  • Oooo, this was so dark and intense! I loved it!

  • Deasun T. Smythabout a year ago

    Nicely done, this is an incredible poem. 😁

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