I love the feel of the sun on my skin
I love the blue sky high up o'er my head
I love the blue agua as it hugs the sand
I love the wind as a kiss upon my lips
I love the song of the tiny bird upon the limb
It does flit, and sing, sit and fly
As if not sure what to make of the day
I love the lazy feel of the sun on my ME
I may sit or lie here for ever into ever
A boat sits idly upon the agua
It begs to go for a sail way, way out
Not a Folk do I see near or far away
They must be at rest, soon to be here
To be a part of all the love, nil to fear
Free from ev'ry care, we sit and sit
Soon, tis time to take a swim
I love the feel of the agua upon my skin
I take a dive, I go deep and long
I love this day
I hope it ne'er ends!
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lovely work! Now I want 2 Go to the beach!!!! 😁
Wonderful poem - as I read this, I felt a breeze of tranquility wash over me. The beach is one of my favorite places. ❤️
That was so blissful! I would hope that it never ends too! Beautiful poem!
i love it
I love... this poem! It was fun and beautifully described! All with four letter words or less! You did a great job playing on the senses of the reader and placing us in this idyllic setting! I felt like I could close my eyes and I was a part of the scene! Great work Novel! 💜
DaahliNk ~ You Always seem to 'Aqua' flood me ~ J-Bud
Awwww!!! The Beach is fabulous and wonderfully written. Could feel the sun and smell the salt in the air. Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Brilliant. This challenge is hurting my head just to think about, but you made it your b’tch. Thanks for bringing me to the sea. 🌊
Naw, this is true.. nature heals! 😄 🌊 ☀️ Clever use of ev’ry etc ! ;0)
Love this!!
Very nice. Well done.
Nice Feels 💕🌴✨😁Great Piece📝