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The Balancing choice

With his brain, or his heart win?

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024

The Balancing choice

He walks a line, so fine, so thin,

A world beneath, a storm within.

The brain sways left, the heart pulls right,

A fragile dance of day and night.

The pole he grips, a lifeline fraught,

With every step, a tangled thought.

The heart cries “Feel!” with passion’s flame,

The brain declares, “This is a game.”

Above the void, he dares to tread,

Where dreams collide with truths unsaid.

Each step, a choice, each breath, a plea,

To find the man he’s meant to be.

Will logic win, its cold embrace?

Or will the heart set free his pace?

The tightrope hums, the tension sings,

A life in balance, where hope clings.

He walks the line, not left, not right,

But forward still, into the night.

For in the end, the truth is clear,

The balance keeps the soul sincere.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Praise Frankabout a year ago

    This reminded me of a quote that says 'the heart knows..' it always knows but sometimes logic can be crucial and achieving that balance between the two can lead to a fulfilling life.. you've put it together wonderfully.. thanks for sharing :)

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    BRAVO!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻🔥💗That is one of the best I’ve seen in a while Marie. Should be a TS.

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmedabout a year ago

    High class

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