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That day…

When everything is…

By Rachel SteinmetzPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
That day…
Photo by Anthony Tran on Unsplash

You know that day when

Your mind is dead,

Your heart underfed?

When nothing comes to mind,

Seeking can’t find?

When you have nothing to say,

Let alone start a day?

When all beauty is dull,

And no amount of filling makes you full?

When fascination is suddenly in a fly

Because everything else makes you sigh?

When even eating can’t busy your time

And now, I can’t even think of a rhythm!!😖

We’ll friends, that day is today

So just make sure to stay away!

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Rachel Steinmetz

Written expression is emotion at its peak; delve into it.

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  • Thomas Terry2 years ago

    I know this feeling all too well. Keep going! You can make it through there is always light on the other side

  • I'm sorry you're feeling this way 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Nice word play and it was heartbreaking.

  • T. Licht2 years ago

    lol, I love love love. I hope it isn't true... your rhymes are awesome... I wish I have the rhyming skills you have.

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