Tethered Nights
A Lunar Epistolary.
Luna...
Forgive my absence, dear wanderer,
maker of night shadows, queen of the
sunless sky...
I have rightfully stolen a moment from
the noise in my life to dutifully respond
to your etchings. Each night I look upon
your calm existence, wondering what all
you have seen.
Witnessed.
Cherished.
Denounced...
You've spectated the birth of everything
on this planet, sealing history in the ancient
bones of your magnificent form, revolving in
an endless, stellar fortress...
*
From the depths of sincerity, I'd like
to send a gracious, thank you. My
mind has been lifted with wisdom and
insight. You've opened doorways to
understanding why I linger in stagnant
pools of self-doubt...
There is so much more to accomplish.
Each day is a gift worth opening. I
realize that now...
I didn't stumble upon your magic by
accident. Whatever cosmic strings you
pulled to weave this connection we have,
remains an enigmatic blessing. I don't
know what it means, but I am listening...
*
I thought about what you wrote last time.
And you're right. How can I expect to
comprehend the answers you give when I
don't fully understand the questions I ask.
In this sea of crumbling faith, questions
are all I have. It will take a little more time
for simple-minded, little me...
There are things to work on, I know. And
I understand your divine intervention won't
be here forever. I pray that it does, though...
As I carve these words into the damp sand, I
watch you slowly rise above the horizon with
an infectious glow that feels personal. In fact,
every time I look at you, it feels like I'm being
watched over...
You'll send the tide soon, receiving my message
as the waterline creeps forward, consuming every
word. And I'll return when it recedes, hoping this
conversation continues. But there is a chill in the
air. Snow will fall soon, freezing our sandy
canvas with the icy wrath of winter's touch.
Listen for my whispers to continue throughout
the frozen nights...
*
One day, I plan to rise to a height even greater than yours...
-LW
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (29)
That ending line is breathtaking it captures ambition, longing, and admiration all at once a perfect closing to a luminous piece.
Love how introspective this one is. The lines on self doubt and the sea of “crumbling faith” where all you have are questions… wow. Heavy, and relatable. Great poem Lamar.
Beautiful, thoughtful piece. With so many standout like, this one i truly get, "How can I expect to comprehend the answers you give when I don't fully understand the questions I ask." Well done, my friend.
I love the feel of this, like a letter to a dear friend!! Congrats on placing fifth in this week's leaderboard, Lamar!!
Kudos on TS and a wonderful letter Lamar.
Congrats on your top story. Oh yes, Of we even knew a fraction of what the moon has seen.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
congratulations on your top story, Lamar. Such a beautiful letter
Congratulations on your top story, Lamar❣👏 Personal stand out section: "I didn't stumble upon your magic by accident. Whatever cosmic strings you pulled to weave this connection we have remains an enigmatic blessing. I don't know what it means, but I am listening." As an avid moon gazer, this made me smile. Best of luck with this challenge!
Such a beautiful prayer to the moon Lamar. Some lovely images woven in to make the whole piece like a hypnotic dream. Congratulations on TS 👏🥰
Great! Congratulations on your top story 🎉🎉🎉
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This was so pretty! I loved the depth of emotion and was especially wowed by the imagery with the tide. So well done, this is a real special one! Congrats on Top Story!
Beautiful imagery! I especially loved the visual of the tide taking your message, and such an inspiring message as well!
Love the image and the words, great poetry
This verse washes over the reader like the tide over the sands. Beautifully written Lamar
I love how personal this poem grows as it nears your grand finale, Lamar. But your legerdemain is what lifts this poem to extraordinary heights - I didn't stumble upon your magic by accident. Whatever cosmic strings you pulled to weave this connection we have, remains an enigmatic blessing. Good luck on the challenge!
This is so exquisitely thoughtful, Lamar! Truly breathtaking in sentiment and phrasing. 💙
Wait, what is this? *sniff sniff* Oh, I know.... the scent of a winning poem. This was beautifully written, Lamar. I bet on you sweeping this challenge. No one can compete with you.
Sweeping, majestic, purposeful, and gorgeously composed. You've knocked it out of the park, Lamar!
Extremely well done! That image of the Moon taking your message by tide was great
Every time I open a poem from you lately it’s like you’ve upped your game again
This is lovely! I especially like "Each day is a gift worth opening". Could almost be a good entry in Paul and John's challenge, too. Good luck ☺
Well-wrought, Lamar! In some ways, we are at greater liberty than the bodies in the Heavens, for their orbits are fixed by their mass and we have more choice in where we move about on this one which we inhabit. Nevertheless, their blessings must always be welcomed and cherished!
Awww, this was so sweet and wonderful! Loved it so much!