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Taste of the Wind

Do you remember?

By Alexander McEvoyPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Taste of the Wind
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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The smell of the rain as it fell on our face

Or the way your skin burned under her eyes?

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The booming of your heart in our ears?

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The way the music pulsed in our veins

Or the sound of her hand on your arm?

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The movement of her lips as she asked us to dance?

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The scent of every step in time with the crowd

Or the sound of our clumsy boots on the cold, hard stones?

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The clicking, whirring flash of the strobing lights

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Do you remember the taste of the wind

The heat that burned against our skin as she laughed

On the day we danced with a memory?

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For Donna

As a thank you for always being in my corner

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About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

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  • Andyabout a year ago

    Young love so sensitive, delicate and complex yet passionately real

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Lovely!

  • Awww Alex, Donna is such a beautiful soul and it takes one to know another. Yes, I mean you, hehehehehe. This was such a beautiful poem for her! I loved it!

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Simply beautiful, Alexander.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    This is wonderful in how your words create a world, I can actually see the wind because of the other senses you evoked

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Some great lines with the subversion of senses, well done

  • Testabout a year ago

    Alex…. This is so beautiful! I loved the imagery and sensory elements and the repetition!! I will always be in your corner and I’m so touched that you mentioned me! 💚 Ironically I’m working on a piece where I do a nod to you too! I appreciate you so much!

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