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Take Two

With A Shot Of Jack

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

Tangled elbows and tender knees

Tastes of loves sweet aftermath

Our kisses burn and only lead

To smoke and whitewashed ash

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Desperately traipse familiar paths

Cares to the wind, with tattered maps

Wanting for more than we can have

Momentary hearts, relapsed

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Ghosts reappear and fade away

As we deny mistakes we’ve made

Dipping our toes in muddy lakes

Thoughtlessly delve, until we wake

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Shadows and dust, of fragile flesh

That pleasure makes

While spirits mesh

Defying fate and common sense

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A fabled front

Unending wish

Hearts want what they want

Under false pretense

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But, life is a dream

Time breezing past

A fleeting scene

Mere happenstance

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And we the pawn in nature’s game

Taking a chance at fantasy

The need to know intimate plans

Enabling hope’s finalities

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Then moving on to new romance

Defying fates and second take

In love and life’s unending dance

Like it was ever ours to make

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! It recalls to my mind this line from The Beatles song Helter-Skelter, which is supposed to be a throwaway song about an amusement park ride, but somehow reads like a life lesson: "You may be a lover but you ain't no dancer"

  • This hit me so hard as it felt so close to the truth. Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That's beautiful, even if a little sad.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Sometimes everything tastes better with a shot of Jack. Great poem.

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